loved

I really loved the story... it was beautiful... I however did not like the female narrator.....

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Great beginning

Definitely captured my interest in the first few chapters but the last half had me eye rolling a lot and was happy when it ended Way too many graphic portrayals of the best sex the characters ever had over and over again.

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I don’t know how I feel about the ending

Loved most of it the ending was good but it felt 🤨. Only way to describe it. Solid listen just 🤨

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nothing

just couldn't get into this story so I Dnf'd it. JUst not my kind of story I guess or maybe a millionaire overload

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sweet romance

This is a sweet, spicy romance that was Well-written and expertly narrated.

I'm not a big fan of the surprise baby trope but this one had a nice twist.

9/10 would date Dr. Mitchell

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Thumbs up

I enjoyed the story and characters in this book. Looking forward to reading other books from this author.

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Great story

Did not like Sarah Puckett voice as the female narrator . find her voice flat, no life with telling the story. it hurt to listen to throughout. However, I’ve always enjoyed Aiden snow voice, he basically kept me throughout the story. Other than that, it was a great story

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Story was great.

I've listened to other Very Long series of books read by these narrators. They do a great job and I like the male voice more than the whispy female reader, but it was kind of distracting trying to focus on this story when the other lives I've discovered through their voices are so different. That's all on me though.

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needed better editing

the writing wasn't bad, but I found the story very boring after the initial set up.

a lot of the character decisions didn't make much sense. all of the surfing scenes were unnecessary and boring. they all could have been cut and it would make no bearing on the plot or character development.

Jake kept referring to himself as an @$$hole but I didn't ever get that? he slept around, but that was the worst thing? all the worsr stuff he did was after the relationship

I really hated all the "psycho b word" language. all the characters seemed very harsh and unsympathetic. and weirdly ableist.

it also really needed a better editor. there were lots of small things that should have been caught. I don't think the author used the word "which" correctly a single time.

they also were constantly referring to Ashley's paintings as "portraits". portraits have people in them. that's basically the definition of a portrait. what Ashley paints are landscapes or just paintings.

also: Ashley's friends were a really good example of tokenism. they were gay. cool, some representation! but they also didn't have any motivations or personality of their own outside of the MCs life. they were only there to be a gay best friend and fulfil the stereotype of gay men who are great at fashion. what year is it????

would definitely not read another book by this author and I don't really get all the good reviews.

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Shallow and Unimaginative

The plot is canned, characters unimaginative, and dialogue uses f-bombs like filler in a cheap "beef" patty.

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